Look at the doodled detail around the flowers, the letters and around the outside of the page. They make all the difference. Also using the black and white photo and the colour contrasts work very well.
I'll take a better main layout photo for the gallery when the light is right.
Not long now until we fly out and still so much to do. Unfortunately the Kits we wanted to release on the day we leave have been held up as the chipboard hasn't arrived but we are going to release them on our return.
